Task 2: Pitch a proposal for a media product

Introduction

In this task I will be presenting my ideas for my final major project. I have developed my idea through focused research in my previous task, I this task I will be pitching my proposal. My proposal will include my content outline, target audience, resources, personal requirements such as project schedule and budgets. I will be pitching my proposal using a projector to present my power point presentation so i can deliver my pitch in front of my class. 

Presentation #01

Pitch #01

Feedback

This is my first pitch presentation my final major project. I believe my first pitch went quite well and the reviews I got were good. For instance the reviews I got included comments such as "Nice presentation, I think your game will sell well." and "Good presentation, lots of detail" You can see the rest of the feedback in a image below. Although I had a comment which suggested a bit of improvement and that was to have more eye contact with the audience. I understand this comment because I could of presented the presentation a bit more confidently. I decided to redo the pitch, putting my feedback into consideration and making my pitch last a little longer. 

Presentation #02

 This is my improved presentation which i am going to be suing for my second pitch. I decided to add more into my presentation, Even though I didn't have any bad feedback about the detail of my presentation, I want to make it a bit longer and include the illustrated images which I have created my self using adobe Photoshop. 

Pitch #02

Feedback

The feedback for my second pitch was a lot better than my first. Even though I didn't get exactly bad 'comments' about my first pitch, I was recommended to speak a bit clearer and to look more at the camera and audience instead of at the board. I took this comment into consideration and the feedback for this pitch is a lot better than my previous pitch. For example I got feedback such as "Well Done. It was a very good presentation. You showed everything that you wanted to put in the game, and have a clear idea of how you want it to turn out." you can see the rest of my feedback In the image below.